Down on the Farm... er, Ranch.

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Who: Ash, Konata, Smoker, Kazooie, Kairi, Vash and OPEN (Also Open to Backlogging)
Where: Pokemon Ranch (Violet City-Route 31)
When: Midday, June 16th (Or other time, since I've been gone, if you want to backlog, just let me know we can do it here. That's anyone who wants to battle, talk, or get a Pokemon Egg.)
Summary: Ash is putting up Konata in the Barn, Vash is starting his new career, and Smoker is ready for a Magikarp battle. Later, Kairi joins in to train in prep for the Violet Gym battle. (And other stuff if someone wants to join in.)
Rating: PG-13


The sun gleams off the snow-white metal roof of the Pokemon Ranch's barn. It sits against a small lake, and the doors face an open field of green and tan-colored grass. Several clouds drift lazily off overhead, a pleasant sight after the recent storms. A few berry plants can be seen to the edge of the field, near a small patch of forested area, where several bird Pokemon can be seen flying about from it into the blue sky.

The wide, red barn door opens on the right side, Ash coming into the sun as he walks with the door. A bright-yellow Mareep trots out happily, finding it's way into the field to nip at grass for the remainder of the day. Ash stands and looks out over the Ranch, a smile crossing his face at the result of his hard work. He wipes his sweat-beaded brow with his sleeve and moves off to the side where there is a large trough, and flicks a switch, which fills it with water. He kneels to wash his face in the fresh water, taking care to view his reflection for dirt and grime from the day's work. After cleaning, he turns and stands, looking out to see if anyone is nearing the gate, about 40 yards away.

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/hugs Don't worry about it! And this looks good! Your prose looks A-ok from my end!

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The Pokemon she admires along the way are two Hoppips, who chirp at her happily as they drift by on the wind, and a Mareep, who bleats happily and follows her over to where Ash is. Once there, it nuzzles Ash's elbow to get his attention.

Ash bows politely to the girl. "Hello! Yes, and you're Kairi? Nice to meet you!"

The Mareep bleats happily, echoing his Trainer's enthusiasm.

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"That's right, it's nice to meet you too!" Kairi reaches down to pat the Mareep gently, admiring the sheep like pokemon. "This place is really amazing," The girl continues, with a small nod to the rest of the ranch. "How did you manage to get all of this up?"

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"I bought the land as you see it, actually. The old man who owned the property was a Breeder himself, but was too old to work, and sold it to me for a song."

[Dandelion was in heaven at the head pats, murmuring happily.]